This Is Just To Say - William Carlos Williams - Parody

Kia ora bloggers, This week in literacy we looked at the poem, This Is Just To Say By William Carlos William and we created our own parody First, we looked at the original poem

I have eaten

The plums

That we’re in the icebox

And which

You were probably

Saving for breakfast

Forgive me they were

Delicious

So sweet

And so cold

As you can see it is quite simple but clear. Next, we replaced the blue words for our own plus we were allowed to change some. Here is my one

I have taken your dogs to the park

They were roaming around on the road

That is why I took them

And which they are happy at the park

You were most likely wondering where they where

And you where Probably going to take them for a walk

Forgive me they were so cute and so fluffy

So sweet

And so warm

My one is quite different from the original as I changed quite a few words.

Have you written any poems??

I look foward to seeing you next time