Thursday, May 16, 2019
Frozen Adventures
In Gillstrom literacy we have been focusing on similes and metaphors we got given the task of creating our own stories using 1-2 metaphors and 1-2 similes, we had to title it Frozen Adventures and write a story about going on holiday to a Frozen Place.
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This reads well Mckenna. There are some excellent examples of descriptive words and I could see at least 1 simile and 1 metaphor example. Something to think about it to use "I" less when starting your sentences. What other word could you use?
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