Kia ora bloggers, This week in literacy we looked at the poem, This Is Just To Say By William Carlos William and we created our own parody First, we looked at the original poem
I have eaten
The plums
That we’re in the icebox
And which
You were probably
Saving for breakfast
Forgive me they were
Delicious
So sweet
And so cold
As you can see it is quite simple but clear. Next, we replaced the blue words for our own plus we were allowed to change some. Here is my one
I have taken your dogs to the park
They were roaming around on the road
That is why I took them
And which they are happy at the park
You were most likely wondering where they where
And you where Probably going to take them for a walk
Forgive me they were so cute and so fluffy
So sweet
And so warm
My one is quite different from the original as I changed quite a few words.
Have you written any poems??
I look foward to seeing you next time
